Cybren's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Space Face (Part 1)]

A very well put-together animation! To those that had continued on in Eddsworld, I applaud you guys in your efforts to keep on a friend's passion. It's still just as funny as ever before! XD Kudos! *5 stars*

[Dot Dot Dot - Animated]

This is SO...

going to have copy-cats of reviews XD
Of all the times I seen people misspell words and proper grammer, I have wondered if people like these ever even managed to graduate Elementary school xD I didn't think it would be possible to do an audio track for grammar as poor as this xD

What also is hilarious is that the fact that the guy REALLY IS dense on the game he played =P

PSTW = Press Space To Win

Kinda the whole aspect of the game of ONLY using a space bar XD I played it and well... it was funny XD Apparently people just simply can't share the humor of it all =P

[Use Your iMagination!]

This is too true AND funny!

Creativity! Funny! And true! (some of it XD)

People nowadays can't even use their imaginations because other people keep making ideas FOR them. I gotta say that I use my imagination non-stop! xD I had my iMagination since I was BORN! =P

But really! This flash shows that you have talent and creativity ^^ I bow to your iMagination =3

[The Mockingbird Song]

Very well made animation!

I love how to story and plot went well together! This deserves a big 10! ^^

[you can't kill me]

Interesting... yet true!

There are 2 notorious web arts that I know that usually have stolen artwork and that's between DeviantArt and SheezyArt. While I have never experienced something such as this nor have I done any wrong, I wouldn't trust those sites unless it's between this one and my personal favorite one =3

It's true how you have written that people tend to favor one over the other and the power of staff members and administrators tend to be abused. But we're all humans and that there will be people that would take advantage of that.

[TmsT's "Spy & Pyro"]

OMFG

When the cupid shot that arrow and the 2 made-out, I was in total shock...

Then it just got crazier and crazier XD Now I know why the spy had so much cigs before! Then came the labor... I thought pyro was male? o.O; but not in this movie apparently @_@

The baby? Man I couldn't help but laugh at that one! Spyro XD Well that put all the pieces together now! XD

This was an awesome animation and I love it! =3

[DBZ Goku Turns Evil Ep 3]

AAAAAAAAW MAAAAAAAAAAN!

I'm a fan of DBZ, but never have I expected something as this! Gohan SS2 and Goku SS! Please! Make more! You've GOT to! X3

[Infinity_]

Interesting!

This is a pretty well made animation! Even if it's a loop, it's got great perspective =3

[The Legend Of Shad]

Impressive!

I'm impressed how well this came out!
I will however give out some advices and some things to improve on...

Constructive advices: As the movie started, I noticed that the outlines are relatively large. To help with this problem, try zooming in to help reduce the bold lines. As Shad starts skipping merrily through the road, the signs seems to be passing rather quickly and are a little unreadable. Maybe you can try to help that by having signs pop up on the sides in a comical manner. I also noticed that when Block-head is facing towards the viewer, he seems a bit stretched out and flattened on the sides. To fix this, try to work on your perspectives a little and study how to manage those tricky views. There's also the matter of frame-per-second issue as well. To create an effective animation, try to have the FPS at the minimum of at least 24. I recommend 36 FPS, but be warned though! The more FPS you have, the greater the space is required! However, it can make your animations more fluid-like and less choppy.

Praising: Because this is your first animation and you tried your best (which came out great btw), You came a long way for that! The comedic way the cartoon has shown now shows that you have potential for a greater cartoons to put more laughter later as your skills would improve. You also manage to put in a music video of the song in the flash that seems to fit into a TV screen that you made (Well done on that!). The fight scene was short, but it did give me more to expect great things later as your skills improve.

I have animated once, but it was rushed and incomplete. However, I learned quite alot in just a short amount of time and put forth my maximum effort myself. I hope you improve yourself and become a great animator in the future! As far as I seen this animation, It's pretty well made! Congratulations!

SuperSpark responds:

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to take that into account next time.

I'm especially taking your advice on the frame rate.When I started I barely cared about it and it worked out alright... Then the fight scene came and I realized how screwy 12 fps was. By then I was too far in to mess with the frame rate.

I'm glad you liked it! :)

[Super Mario bros Z ep.8 (old series)]

You....are....a..... GOD!! <3

Epic...Flash....EVER!!!
The suspense is gonna drive me nuts!!! Dx
What will happen?!?! DX